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 *Hey, Listen! Rust is alpha-level software with many known bugs, incomplete features and planned future changes. Use at your own risk, expect some instability, disruption and source-level incompatibility for a while yet.*
 
-If this is your first time then perhaps you would like a peek at the [[docs|Docs]].
+Is this your first time? Then perhaps you would like a peek at the [[docs|Docs]].
 
-Rust is developed through a completely open process by friendly people who congregate at [#rust on irc.mozilla.org][pound-rust]. If you run into problems, IRC is the best place ask for help.
+Rust is developed through an open process by friendly people who congregate at [#rust on irc.mozilla.org][pound-rust]. If you run into problems, IRC is the best place ask for help.
 
-If you want to hack on Rust itself then read the [[getting started guide for Rust developers|Note getting started developing Rust]].
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-If you intend to edit this wiki, please follow some [[conventions|Note wiki conventions]]. 
+Please follow some [[conventions|Note wiki conventions]] when editing this wiki.
 
 [pound-rust]: http://chat.mibbit.com/?server=irc.mozilla.org&channel=%23rust
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